by prabuddhadg » June 8th, 2009, 10:07 am
What do you mean boring? Actually this reminds me of Chris Bonington's writing. He is the British Everest climber. He had this rambling kind of style of writing, and you would go on reading and only after you had completed a long section, would you realise that he was actually describing a life and death situation.
Here you are, writing about climbing a killer 16% slope, and how do you describe it? "I kept a constant pace on the final 12-16% to the top and saw the other rider getting dropped by some 50m." You expect that to give readers goosebumps? Come to think of it, you don't. I guess you enjoy the ride and when you quickly describe how it went, you visualise the scenes, and that makes you feel good. So, you think your writing was nice.
Hey Pranav, why don't you try and describe this same scene in your style? By the way, is Gautam away? He seems to be not posting for some time??